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Pretty lashes dance in time
To the rhythm of the clouds
In my head she’s all mine –
The only place allowed

There’s a hole under her lip,
She’s got bewildering jet black hair
I’m comforted in her eyes,
Her solemn knowing stare

I keep her to myself
She’s my deliciously quiet secret
Doing dark deeds in dark corners,
Until our energy has depleted

Her curves are so familiar
Like my own,
They’re soft to touch
Overwhelmed with her sweetness –
Oh! It’s all too much

She’s not quite around the corner
Or just around the bend
She’s miles away in the day time
But at night, she’s in my bed

Whispers and mild overtones
About our clandestine rendezvous
Confidential and private
Her very presence is my muse

Her every thought is captivating
Her ideas are felt through her hands

I cannot tell my best friend about her
Because I don’t think she’ll understand
©2006-2009 ~strAngEbutOK
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Author's Comments

Full Title: "I don’t think she’ll understand"

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Mostly romantic

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Controversy equates to a four letter word beginning with c and ending with t.

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Please reserve any judgemental comments for NOTES.

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Rhyming sux.

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:iconbunnyheadwounds:
... I love it.

:heart:

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We didn't give it a mouth so it cannot complain.
:iconpsychoticangels:
:)

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"What the deuce are you staring at?
It's tuna fish... And nothing else!"
Stewie Griffin
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:highfive:

Deviation of the day! :winner:
:iconstrangebutok:
:blushes: aw, thank you. :hug:

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Doctor strAngE Love...
:iconstrangebutok:
what are you smiling about???

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Doctor strAngE Love...
:iconstrangebutok:
thank you very much. xoxoxo

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Doctor strAngE Love...
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:+fav:
wow.....wow, wow, wow........
awsome.
you sure do got a tallent! love it!!
:hug:
feel for the subjects tho....

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life is Jim, but not as YOU know it! :shakefist:
:iconpsychoticangels:
Your writing talent. You make people feel how you feel, just by written words.

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"What the deuce are you staring at?
It's tuna fish... And nothing else!"
Stewie Griffin

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